Posts Tagged ‘carry on tuesday’

carry on tuesday #70 – a haiku

September 13, 2010 7 comments

I am posting this haiku for Carry On Tuesday #70. Please enjoy!


One misty morning

rain fell upon calming waters;

Eagle’s flew freely.

                                                          (c) 2010 by D. Wright



(untitled) – Carry On Tuesday #69

August 31, 2010 19 comments

Photo courtesy of: blue-star

I stand in line patiently awaiting
my inevitable arrival, so far away
these gates of marble and fresco,
gleaming in golden sun much larger here.

So slow it moves this line I know,
yet matter not enthralled as we are,
moving ever closer, our eternal fates
as thoughts, creep forward, on step nearer.

Gunshots ring in alleys dripping
dark and wet, the red of blood
washed down gutters to oceans
far, my body cold as raindrops fall.

(c) 2010 by D. Wright

This was written for Carry On Tuesday #69. I’m not sure if it is finished or if more is needed so any critical feedback would be great! Thanks for stopping by and enjoy!


Updating this for Jingle’s Poetry Potluck – 12 Sept 2010. Hope everyone enjoys!