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Cherish…

Watching peaceful sleep;

No better place in the world

then here by your side.

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Blissful ignorance;

My time spent now gone, wasted

with my selfish pride.

******

Cherish all you have;

Alone again, a lifetime

is a big number.

                                                                         (c) 2010 by D. Wright

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For todays Poetry Pantry I tried to write a love poem. Instead, I ended up with a semi love poem that ends painful. Don’t ask me why, love poetry is my Achilles’ heel. Hope everyone enjoys! 

**photo courtesy of desktop nexus

 

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  1. September 19, 2010 at 9:11 am

    love the ending,
    well written piece.
    Thanks for sharing!

  2. September 19, 2010 at 1:57 pm

    And you have done it to perfection even though not as you planned!! Love the last ztanza xxx

  3. September 19, 2010 at 2:25 pm

    Astonishing haiku’s! Delightful!

  4. September 19, 2010 at 4:00 pm

    Profound truths p[ithily expressed. So well done. Sad, and realistic. And the last lines are fantastic! Whew!

  5. September 19, 2010 at 6:37 pm

    This piece is lovely–great work

  6. September 20, 2010 at 4:50 am

    Wonderful haikus…i love them! 🙂

  7. meaghan
    September 23, 2010 at 1:37 pm

    I am so one of those people who lies and says nothing is wrong.

  8. September 23, 2010 at 5:48 pm

    beautiful Haiku!
    well done!

  9. September 25, 2010 at 11:24 am

    Your Haiku form holds true throughout the piece…well done. Love poetry is often as much about pain as it is about happiness; this IS a Love poem.

  10. September 26, 2010 at 9:06 am
  11. October 4, 2010 at 11:21 am

    Wonderfully woven..

    http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/10/poetry-potluck-natures-elements-air.html
    Greetings, friend!!
    It is Monday, I sincerely invite you to join us for a Monday Poetry Potluck party, bring in 1 to 3 poem treats to share, and have fun tasting other poets treats.
    You will have 60 hours enjoying the fun.
    Hurry up, the more you share, the happier we are.
    Hope to see you in our party, hurry up, the earlier you are in, the more traffic you get…
    to link in, click on the link via this comment, then look at the blue link button at the end of the post, click on the button, have your poem link copy and pasted in the first box, then enter your name, at last your email address…let us know if you need help by leaving a comment under the same post…

  12. Jingle
    December 6, 2010 at 3:44 pm

    Glad to Land at your fantastic poetry land today,
    How are you?

    Love your poetry talent, Please join us at Jingle Poetry Monday potluck tonight,
    First time participants can link in 1 to 3 old poems, poems unrelated to our theme are welcome!

    Happy Monday/Tuesday!
    Hope to see you in.
    xxx

  1. September 22, 2010 at 5:49 am

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